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Jul 25, 2007

I am.

(this ones for Pa. tc dad n God bless)

I am the shades of green on the plastic plant.
I am the trail of a tear in the eyes of a spoilt kid.
I am the burnt rubber mixed w/ blood on the hard road.
I am the over boiling, spilling milk near the tired, lost house maid.
I am the fear in the heart of a death sentenced rapist.
I am the colour of the bruise on the face of the abused boy.
I am the drug abuse of the parent.
I am the temptation to run away from problems.
I am the empty head of the yapping chic and the lust of the guy staring at her.
I am the desperate kiss and puff of smoke after the fling.
I am the unchanging steady face of the violent child.
I am the greed felt by a young beggar looking at the building.
I am the relish in the left over food.
I am the satisfaction of a rich man and mediocrity of the middle class man.
I am the happy guilt of the first kiss and scared freedom of the last.
I am the relaxation of a pedicure.
The howling of a hungry dog.
The blazing fire in the candle light dinner.
I am the power to manipulate, plot and hurt an innocent soul.
I am the smudge of kohl near the eyes of an old whore.
I am the wishing eyebrows of a drag queen.
I am the bejeweled hands of a show off and sparkle in the tear during sex.
I am the cable wire blocking the sky and dark eye shadow of a seductress.
I am the cut wrist and the bad hair cut.
I shine in the sun reflecting in your sweat.
I am the obsession and ridicule of a bully.
I am the blush on the bride’s face and knife to cut the cake.
I am the jealousy and helplessness of the ex and empty pride of the present.
The speechless head of the retired breadwinner.
The ink for the writer.
I am evil...
I AM.
Who am I? I am God!

8 comments:

Dee said...

I am, touched. U touch my soul...

VT thinks said...

I think u've got hold of the nerve of the theme really well..

Though i dun like the feel of it... if i had to comment without personal preferences... i'd say its by far the best u've written.

Well done.

dreamer said...

whew!

before reading your post i read this
http://hahahehelollol.blogspot.com/2007/07/this-insomnia-i-cannot-take-let-storm.html

and i thought that was intense.. then i read your post..

all i can say is that what you have written makes so much sense.

very strong words

Anonymous said...

yes! really touching.

srdash said...

Thanx you also for your comment on my blog and feel sorry to know that you didn't like my posting. So, this is my another blogpage: http://www.meeraculous.blogspot.com/

Aditya Narayan Roy Choudhury said...

I SEE U R TRAVELLING PLACES, PRAKRUTI. siiting at that silent writing table. keep going. dont fear anybody. not even god.


..this is aditya.

Rahul Vidwans said...

Gives me a wormy feel in my tumm.

Kickass.

PJ said...

Thank you Rahul