(hmm another poem written long time bk. lets jus say im in da mood of posting stuff :D)
Everywhere around me I see people...
Different, loving, trying, thinking,
Hoping...
Everywhere around me I see things...
Good, bad, bright, dull;
Just there.
Everywhere around me, I see space...
Lots of it.
Just a simple empty space,
Which unearths its way between all this...
And then the battle begins;
My amour of defense comes up;
I try to wrestle, but who can fight space.
It was like the desert sand,
Fatal but when held slips away…
Then they come…people and things for your salvage.
You hide behind them and it seizes your being even intently…
I observe it as it fills me up and consumes me,
I observe as it shows me inside every one and every thing
I wonder if this is what we have in store,
Of this momentary and alluring span of life…
6 comments:
profound, very profound..
made me think :D
boy! ma'am, it seems that you do have sort of a temper! though not exactly 'temper' though! [:)] would you mind, if i called it 'patience'!?? no hard feelings please. take it lightly.
listen prakruti, i shall talk to you soon. perhaps on saturday. you see, i dont have a p.c.; and i am so less frequent even on my mails. i dont even have a g-talk id. [i will make it!! now.] and to make matters worse, i dont get much time.
i want to talk to you as well. i'll mail you about this. for if we dont set a time from before, itz hard to track me. and i think you too are a busy person. but there may just be a difference! [:)] you see, busy or not busy, ..[:)] it's all about the time we individually spend in front of the computer. and i guess, yours' will be much higher in that aspect!
p.s. : let's not eat up our blog spaces on these issues. i'll mail you. positively. tonight. or tomorrow.
and i didn't comment on your post. for i dont want to read them in a hurry. i'll do it on saturday. around 12 o' clock!
MAYBE, YES!
[:)]
we can only watch! as life speeds by!
defence?
needed?
no! ..if we knew how to "accept"! ..how to "assimilate"!
one who has no individuality needs no defence! it's negative: you cant figure YOURSELF out! it's too dreadful a feeling to get lost yourself! no individuality means no self!
..it's positive: when you dont have a self, you dont have any existing limitation beyond which you can't go! so you become fluid, smooth. it's then easy to seep through. anywhere and everywhere. and its then easy to see the world as it is!
TO IMPARTIALLY STUDY SOMETHING, YOU NEED TO BE DETTACHED. IF YOU HOLD ONTO YOURSELF SO STRONGLY, WITH THE FEELING OF GETTING "LOST" HOVERING EVERYTIME, ..HOW CAN YOU SEE THE WORLD?
[:)]
any reply comments?
boy! i feel the heat straight away!
[:)]
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